Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 


Research (through presentation AND blog)   2/5
Music video/magazine concept                    3/5
Language: terminology and theory               3/5
Representations                                           3/5
Audience and Industry                                  3/5
Delivery                                                         2/5
Total out of 30                                             16/30

-Introduction mentions song but not the original artist or concept.

-Sponsorship is excellent in terms of how media language would be used to bring it into video but may need to settle on board and make that clearer.

-Presentation is quite text heavy and therefore most slides are simply reading the text with back to audience.

-I like the magazine element-online and print good to see this aspect addressed.

-Industry context good too-mainstream aspect of brief covered

-Representation slide really interesting but slide change before reading the text which is a shame. Worth developing this idea(representation of adult life)in statement of intent.

-Way too much text on mis-en-scene slide but some good ideas in terms of tone and feel.

-Audience is addresses across two slides but need a bit more depth and detail to expand this.

-Overall, lacking in media theory so this is something to bring into statement of intent

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

-WWW:
Nice editing style 
Detailed slides
Good idea and song-narrative
Good audience analysis and representation 
Good mis-en-scene

-EBI:
Too much writing on each slide
Reading off the board
Too much text

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 

-I can use the feedback from the power point to write my statement of intent and make sure I include the original artist and concept. I should also talk about he representation in the music video and make sure I write about media theories as well. I am thinking of staying to the idea of my music video about a girl coming back to her home to find it feeling empty and then she reminisces her past but eventually finds herself again after living a boring and dull adult life.

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