editing and LR




1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher.

-Starts brilliantly, good continuity editing moving into the room and the music fits this brilliantly
 
2) Type up your feedback from fellow students.

-Before shooting this I didn't quite understand the 180 rule ,and therefore got it wrong in the video.
-Dialogue section is fine in terms of editing but framing of OTS shots leaves a lot of dead space
-Towards end you lose the continuity editing with several quite significant continuity errors(characters moving location between shots etc.). This is a great lesson in editing attention to detail.

3) Now reflect on your video. Did you meet the brief and successfully include the three key editing aspects we have learned?

WWW:
-Great match on action
-Fighting scene was great-although there was a bit of a pause 
-Good story line-narrative was there
-Editing was quite smooth 

EBI:
-Teacher disappears
-Dead space in the over the shoulder shots
-A finger was shown in one of the shots
-Breaks the 180 rule
-Quality of the audio was unclear at the beginning
 
4) What were the strengths and weaknesses of your final film? Write a detailed analysis picking out specific shots, edits and any other aspect of film language you think is relevant.

-A weakness of mine was that at the beginning it was quite noisy around where we were filming but my strength was that the music fit quite well with the scene of fighting.

5) Learner response: what aspect of editing did you find most difficult? What have you learned from this process that will help you when you start the actual coursework later this year?

-I found it quite hard to editing it to make it seem flawless, but this is a lesson I have learned so that my editing has continuity.

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