'Preliminary exercise learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.
MEARAJ, Marwa
-Lots to credit here – the black and white works perfectly and the initial lip synching to the diary is brilliant. There is the basis for an excellent video here. -Opening shot has bins very prominent! The black and white does hide it a little but maybe cut in slightly later?
-The biggest issue is that editing effectively stops once the diary shot begins – that must be on screen for almost 30 seconds? A music video (even for a slow song) still needs to maintain a sense of pace or movement.
-You will need another scene / location / performance element for the full video.
-Needed brand identity of your artist in there – that was part of the brief for the preliminary exercise.
-WWW:
2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your work.
3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?
4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?
5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything about your actual coursework video plan? This could include your concept, cast/actors or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork or editing.
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