'Preliminary exercise learner response
1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. MEARAJ, Marwa -Lots to credit here – the black and white works perfectly and the initial lip synching to the diary is brilliant. There is the basis for an excellent video here. - Opening shot has bins very prominent! The black and white does hide it a little but maybe cut in slightly later? -The biggest issue is that editing effectively stops once the diary shot begins – that must be on screen for almost 30 seconds? A music video (even for a slow song) still needs to maintain a sense of pace or movement. -You will need another scene / location / performance element for the full video. -Needed brand identity of your artist in there – that was part of the brief for the preliminary exercise. -WWW: -Love the match on action -Nice monochrome -Good angles -Good colour scheme -Good use of zoom on shoe sponsorship -Interesting concept -Good lip syncing -EBI: -